Mise en scence video feedback

·        1. The key problem is that it is not clear from your video or mood board what look you are trying to create – this is an essential aspect of the brief (e.g. pop star, horror film zombie, James Bond etc.)

·         The pace and framing is about right for the video although be aware of what is in the shot (there are distracting elements in the background around the edge of the frame for this video).

·         The other issue is lighting – the video is overexposed which means a lot of the screen is effectively bright white. This in addition creates a graininess to the whole production which significantly lowers production values. This emphasises the importance of choosing the location carefully, checking the lighting and making sure the framing of the shot is just right.

2. This video was not shown in class therefore i did not get any student comments.

3.WWW-I placed the camera in the right position and my editing made the video more free flowing and smooth.

EBI-I didn't choose a suitable setting since there were distracting elements in the background making the video lose its professionalism.


4.The different colours , passion and creativity displayed in the pictures on my mood board of makeups and the art of it inspired me to create an edgy and unique makeup look but also has an element of simplicity.

5.I could choose a better setting and film on a camera so the quality of the video is better and more clear. I could also improve the pace of my editing because my editing was quite fast and was hard too point what sort of editing technique was used. Lastly, i would make my video more lengthy because it  didn't meet the brief time of 1 minute.

6. Mise en scence has a huge effect on the display on of the characters such as costume and makeup which shows the audience what type of character they are based on their style.