1.Teachers Feedback; Shadow of ca,era operator in shot which is huge error to avoid in future.No editing just one shot although this did end up covering a range of shot types.No real indication you ave read or met the brief here only 30 seconds , no labelling and no understanding of cinematography shown. This is a wake up call before taking on coursework.
2.students feedback; www-good closeups Ebi- label shots
www-clear visual shot EBI-too short include other camera shots and angles.
www-good closeups. EBI- there weren't any cuts
www-creative Ebi -label shots use more than one clip.
www-good shots
ebi- more variety
3.my EBI
could use more than one shot
could label shots
could edit better
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used good landscape
good variety of shots
good use of camera angles
4.I learnt that I should use more than one clip and edit it better. I understand the significance of meeting the brief and would like to widen my knowledge of different shots such as the crane shot which I was confused by
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